this poem makes me want to go snuggle in my own bed! I liked how you compared the blanket to a hug from a loving mother. nice job.
Indeed, this is a comforting image. One thing I might point to, though, is how the original compares something human or man-made to something natural.
I like that you chose to make this more personal with your mother's hug. Since most students are away from home I could see them relating to this.
this poem makes me want to go snuggle in my own bed! I liked how you compared the blanket to a hug from a loving mother. nice job.
ReplyDeleteIndeed, this is a comforting image. One thing I might point to, though, is how the original compares something human or man-made to something natural.
ReplyDeleteI like that you chose to make this more personal with your mother's hug. Since most students are away from home I could see them relating to this.
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